Preliminary exercise learner response

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 WWW: You have displayed some excellent editing and technical skills throughout this preliminary exercise.You established the fantasy genre through good use of conventions such as: SFX, great costume (the black leather jacket worked well in your project and in Aliya’s). I liked the cut shots which built the enigma of the chase scene and the upside down camera angle was a clever touch - very Stranger Things-eque.



EBI: 
For the actual chase scene I wondered if you could have included a variety of camera shots and angles to increase the overall pace of the chase because at times it felt slow and monotonous with just the over-the-shoulder shot.



3 WWW:

 - My preliminary exercise fits the genre of fantasy.
- It includes a chase scene
-Costume 


3 EBI:

- Not a lot of different shots
- Unclear story behind it
- Not long enough


3 things i will do next time:

-Film beforehand and not rush the filming
- More characters
- Spend more time on editing

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