Preliminary exercise learner response
WWW: You have displayed some excellent editing and technical skills throughout this preliminary exercise.You established the fantasy genre through good use of conventions such as: SFX, great costume (the black leather jacket worked well in your project and in Aliya’s). I liked the cut shots which built the enigma of the chase scene and the upside down camera angle was a clever touch - very Stranger Things-eque. EBI: For the actual chase scene I wondered if you could have included a variety of camera shots and angles to increase the overall pace of the chase because at times it felt slow and monotonous with just the over-the-shoulder shot. 3 WWW: - My preliminary exercise fits the genre of fantasy. - It includes a chase scene -Costume 3 EBI: - Not a lot of different shots - Unclear story behind it - Not long enough 3 things i will do next time: -Film beforehand and not rush the filming - More characters - Spend more time on editing